Persuassive Writing Piece

I believe that the world needs less polution because polution is destroying our Earth. Polution is the cause of why polar ice caps are melting, why the atmosphere is being destroyed, and why destructive weathe happens.
When cars, airplanes, and other vehicles like ships release exhaust into the atmosphere, it forms Greenhouse gasses. These Greenhouse gasses trap sunlight heating the planet. This heat is melting polar ice caps and increasing the water levels of the ocean. If this goes on, nation like Indonesia, New Zealand, and Japan could be submerged under water.
This is not all that polution will cause the world. Each day many species of animals come to near extinction, but we also come closer to death every day if we keep on poluting this much. We depend alot on our atmosphere to keep gravity levels equal and because of our Oxygen. We need Oxygen to breathe, but with our polution we are destroying the atmosphere making matters even worse. If polution keeps on, the atmosphere will be unstable making our planet impossible to live on.
If destroying our atmosphere, flooding most of the world, or causing extinction to our animals; polution is bad and there is ways of how to help stop polution. By not wasting electricity, by using an appropriate amount of water and by trying to be more fuel efficient we can help save our planet and stop polution.